2005-08-13 11:18 pm

Note to Vakar: Edition 2

Your three favourite things are being snarky, drinking, and getting laid. You get to do all of these in this chapter. So, um, what's the problem here? Oh, and you also get to pull a knife on someone, although I'm not sure who at the moment. Just go to the party and let me write, damn you. She's really much better in this draft.

Much love and appreciation,
Sarah
2005-06-11 05:41 pm

Memo to Vakar

All right, buster. Let's get one thing straight: You were NOT supposed to fall in love with her yet. This was supposed to be *gradual.* Christ, I have another girlfriend that you must fall in love with and then angst over first. Not to mention: SHE'S FIFTEEN! Even YOU think that's gross, perv though you are, remember? Patience.

You'll get some. Eventually.

Progress: Don't ask.
Wordcount: Negligible.